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Sonadow RP - Lost Treasure 1

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A blue hedgehog was working in the fields with his friends. But not a simple blue hedgehog. But the blue hedgehog that all the neighborhood loved and cherished. Because he was brave, worked a lot to help, generous, and, beautiful as well. Every of his movements seemed alluring to his friends, and all of the people around. He had so delicate hands that even an angle could not beat his beauty. Fine curves, gorgeous emerald eyes, and magnificent sapphire fur. You could say that he was priceless. Turning his head to the side, he could see the signal telling all the worked that the work had to be finished. He dig his tool in the ground and walked to his friends. There was to be a huge dinner today, to celebrate out blue treasure birthday. He seemed really happy, that adorable smiled on his face, and those sparkles in his eyes. But when he arrived...he didn't see a hole happy neighborhood. But a frightened one. Some King's guards were here. He advanced toward them. "What do you want soldiers ! We already paid what we had to." His voice seemed to freeze the soldiers, as if they heard the most beautiful thing in their life. Regaining some composure, a soldier came to him in answer, giving him a letter. 'You are to come at the reception, organized by King Shadow.' Was all it said. Raising an eyebrow, the sapphire shook his head and put the paper back into the soldiers hand. "Tell your King that I don't have any spare time for this. And, if he wants to see me...ha has to know my name." He grinned and walked to his friends, music starting, laughs, giggles, and jokes beginning to be heard as well.




The soldier sighed, but then headed back to the castle along with the other guards. Once they came through the doors, King Shadow glared at them with a piercing look. The froze. "King Shadow!" Said the soldier. "That blue hedgehog, he has denied your request!" The King was speechless. A few moments later, he answered the fellow soldier. "Why would he do such a thing? To deny the King for a special request to a reception? I don't see why he chose to do that." The Solder looked down, then back up to the King. "He said for him to do such a thing, you must know his name." king Shadow thought for a moment. "His name, eh...?" he responded. "Well if he wants me to know his name, then that's just what ill do...."




The day after, the sapphire was tidying up all the mess they have done during their little feast. He seemed to be rather happy about it, since all of the neighborhood seemed to be really tired by now, which meant that they really had fun. Once he finished doing that, he headed to the forest, and put his clothes off when he arrived near a hot spring. The way he was putting his clothes off, looked so alluring, so graceful, his magnificent sapphire pelt shinning under the sun, the silkiness of the skin easily noticeable. He plunged into the warm water a content sigh escaping his lips.But suddenly, he heard noise coming to a bush. Hiding his body, he shouted to it. "Who's there !" With his beautiful voice.




The bushes began to ruffle and shake. The blue hedgehog became frightened. Something jumped from them. The hedgehog stepping away, was only to see a rabbit before him. He sighed in relief as the snow white bunny hopped away intot the forest. The hedgehog was now at ease. He continued to rub the water onto his shoulders and down his arms up to his finger tips. Contently he smiled. The hedgehog turned his head to see a creature sitting before him onto a rock. In shock, the exposed hedgehog jumped and nearly fell under the water within the hot spring. "Hello there, hedgehog..." a dark voice slipped through his fangs. "Nice to finally meet you in person. I'm curious to know more about you."




The sapphire hedgehog slowly stood up and put the clothe near him on his beautiful body. "You should announce yourself before coming like that to the others..." He said, turning his back from the other, his beautiful sapphire fur shinning with the sun. Looking behind his shoulder, he sighed. "Turn around !" He yelled at him while he was drying his fur off. When he was finished, he turn to the ebony hedgehog. "What's your name...and what do you want ?"




"Heh," The dark creature chuckled to himself. Mostly covered within is cape, all you could see was he fangs poking out from his smile. "That's exactly what i want to know."




The sapphire crossed his arms and looked into the other's eyes, his emerald pools sparkling with defiance. "I won't tell you my name if you don't." He stated, and started to tied his belongings up. "I have a thousand things to do. So or you tell me your name now...or you can always come back tomorrow..." He said in a soft tone, turning to the stranger.




The ebony creature jumped up grabbed the blue hedgehog by the shoulder. "I'm not playing around, young hedgehog." he growled. "I demand to know your name. With that, I'll give you my information."




The azure glared at him, and pushed the ebony hand off his shoulder. "Guess it if you're so eager to know it !" He exclaimed and started to walk toward the forest, his long quills moving slightly with the wind, his divine fragrance floating behind him. Turning around, the sapphire giggled slightly. "You're blushing, and you better clean your red nose. Nosebleed is not really helpful here..."




"Keh! Don't flatter yourself" snarled the dark creature. "Seems though as if it is giving you a lot of confidence here. However, for I have been the one that requested you the reception that I've heard that you declined."




For a moment, the blue seemed to search for what he has declined. "Ah ! Yes. I'm sorry, my King, but with the fields to take care of, and my brother to look after, I can't go to this reception. If I leave the home, barbarians could attack, and kill him. Right at the moment, no one is at home, so I know he is safe." He bowed slightly. "Now if you excuse me, but, I don't really think that King should be treated like gods...they're just simple Mobians." He said with a smile that seemed to make the other blush more. "Sonic...is my name." And with that, he disappeared in the woods.




King Shadow thought for a moment. "Barbarians, eh? They are quite a problem with many villages..." The ebony hedgehog raised his wrist up to his mouth. "Soldier #24!" he shouted. "Yes," a voice responded. The King smiled. "I've found out about this blue hedgehog. He name seems to be...Sonic... Has a certain ring to it. But in any case, he declined my request for he and his brother are threatened by The Barbarians. I'll do a favor for him." King Shadow grew a smirk on his face. "What is it you want me to do?" said the voice. King Shadow paused for a moment, then responded. "Inform the other guards. Not a difficult task, but it does involve more than one."




But when Sonic was back home, he found out that his brother was too as well, but his fear became right. Barbarians had followed him to his house and were threatening the entire neighborhood. "Hey ! Get out of here bastard !!" He screamed, using his sword to fight against the giants. He had killed several of them, but the leader came behind him, taking him in his arms on his horse. "Mmmm...What do we have here...a nice bride for myself ? Or another toy ?" He chuckled at the sapphire squirmed, struggled to get free. "A beautiful prize inddeed..." The barbarian whispered. As he was panting, Sonic noticed two ruby eyes staring at him in the shadows. 'Could it be...the King ?' He asked himself.




In an instant, a flash of light whipped right past Sonic's head. The barbarian that had Sonic within his headlock had released his grip. As a matter of a fact, he was speechless. The pupils of the barbarian rolled to the back of his head. Something about him seemed...off. He cocked his head to the side, then suddenly, the head hit the ground. Silence came upon the battlefield until King Shadow's soldiers dashed onto the field up to the barbarians. About time to put these barbarians back into their place. In hell.  King Shadow thought.




The beautiful azure hedgehog landed on the ground, a bit too harshly, which caused his leg to be hurt, broken in fact. He bit his tender lips o not scream and tried to get up, but sadly he couldn't. The pain was beginning to be unbearable, too much for the delicate rose he was. He coughed a bit, since dirt was thrown on him thanks to the horses, and gripped at the ground, trying to crawl. But it seemed useless. His pants seemed to be the only music he was hearing, and suddenly feeling someone grab him putting him on a horse, he collapsed, his leg positioned in a weird way, bruises all over his delicious skin, deep cuts letting blood cover a bit his precious sapphire fur.




King Shadow had noticed Sonic from afar. For a moment he felt like his heart was pierced. The sky blue hedgehog upon the dirty battlefield. The creature must have been hurt. Badly. King Shadow felt aching in his chest. Could it have been worry~? The dark creature walking up to one of his guards before departing from the fighting. "I need to ask a favor of you." The King told his guard. "Y-yes! Anything you wish, my lord." King Shadow thought for a moment as he looked back at that blue blur within the dust. "Thank you. Its not much, but i would like you to assist that blue hedgehog over there to my castle." The guard nodded and left from King Shadow's sight. For the King himself, he took one of the horses and led along the path, fading within the dust from the dirt.
A little Sonadow RP me and :iconjb44: Put together~! :) I think it sounds really good for the first chapter! Let us know whatcha think and see if ya want more to come your way~!
Now in the story, :iconjb44: Talks onto Sonic's part as i talk on Shadow's part. She goes first, then we go in a pattern from here on out~ Enjoy & comment~;p

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PLZ CONTINUE I WAIT FOR A YEAR ALREADY !!